this is the story of us

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this is the story of us. at the start, everything was new and happy. we talked every day, we laughed, and we shared everything. i felt so close to you and you felt close to me too. we cared for each other a lot.

but with time, things changed. you started to keep inside the things that bothered you. you did not tell me right away when something hurt you. you smiled and stayed quiet, but inside you felt bad. i did not see it at first. i thought everything was okay.

little by little, those things started to grow. you had more in your heart that you did not say. i kept talking like always, not knowing how you felt. you tried to be patient, but it made you tired.

when you finally told me, it was already too much. we both cared for each other, but the problems had been there for a long time. you wanted me to be better, and i wanted the same for you.
ITS all my fault, i just kept commenting things of what things about you i didnt like at the beggining of the relationship. i kept doing things and saying all of that stuff... I wish i could say i loved you A LOT, A LOT. but if i had loved you enough, this would not have happened.
we decided to end it because it was the best for both of us. but even if it was the best, i still miss you and think of you. i love you and i will always remember what we had. i really love you. i hope you still feel the same.

Last updated on:2025-08-11T13:46:02+05:30

Comments (3)

Liminovogh
Liminovogh 7 mths ago

reading this feels like hearing my own breakup. i thought honesty meant pointing out every flaw. i didn’t see how much it wore him down until it was over.

Kiilavio21
Kiilavio21 7 mths ago

they held on as long as they could. maybe too long. sometimes caring a lot just isn’t enough to fix what’s been piling up.

jellyfish
jellyfish 7 mths ago

i hate how we realize what we had when it’s already gone. all those little things i used to point out. now i’d give anything to just shut up and hold you.